tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413754079238631404.post844816786815410578..comments2023-04-06T23:09:42.914+10:00Comments on Inspiration: The Path Through the Trees UpdateJ.A.Penrosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14315929950369312995noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413754079238631404.post-58405597266723023032015-07-10T17:42:21.944+10:002015-07-10T17:42:21.944+10:00Are you telepathic!!? That is exactly what I had i...Are you telepathic!!? That is exactly what I had intended to change it to. After all, it had the wrong rhythm to begin with anyway.J.A.Penrosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14315929950369312995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413754079238631404.post-74872290797590527192015-07-08T13:08:26.972+10:002015-07-08T13:08:26.972+10:00Fear rhymes with Deer...you could say 'Smoke f...Fear rhymes with Deer...you could say 'Smoke filled her heart with fear'... maybe? I really don't knowJane Mareehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13829434202814787549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413754079238631404.post-434222908590831922015-07-08T09:31:36.692+10:002015-07-08T09:31:36.692+10:00Name something that rhymes with deer and fits, bef...Name something that rhymes with deer and fits, before you call me a Skandian! Although, it would be awkward if you could...J.A.Penrosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14315929950369312995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413754079238631404.post-12685490825025828922015-07-06T08:16:07.413+10:002015-07-06T08:16:07.413+10:00Quite good really, you're doing quite well con...Quite good really, you're doing quite well considering you've only got an old version of Lydia's story. Nowadays it's Lydia's Uncle not her grandfather...but I've only changed that recently. <br /><br />Can I just say, Deer and Air definitely don't rhyme...You'd make a good Skandian... :DJane Mareehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13829434202814787549noreply@blogger.com