Friday 18 September 2015

A VERY Late Path Through the Trees 6

     
        Sorry I've been so long! I hopefully will not make you wait for that long again. As long as I don't end up with a heap of exams I won't...hopefully. I guess I'll jump right to it now!
 
The Path Through The Trees
 
Alone Lyd took done two guards
Then slipped into the darkness,
To the countryside, 
And hid from all eye's sharpness.
 
Once more she began plotting
This time, this time how to free Annette,
But she needed weapons,
On that goal she was dead set.
 
She slipped into the cover,
Of the ship for the first time,
And then she slipped aboard,
And found her weapons, 'mongst slime!
 
      
       Well... I hope that passes. Um, sorry about Lydia's slimy weapons, but I had a mental blank. Also, I hope that Jane noticed the word 'slipped'. I did it just for you! Oh well, I could have said 'sip' instead of 'ship'... soon I'll add 'slugging over shoulders' and 'gently heaving'! :)


1 comment:

  1. Oh dear...I did notice the slipping...
    The edited/rewritten copy has no slugging or gently heaving, so I protest! :) Don't forget to add some randomly hacking at chains.... :D

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